Vampire Girl with Green Eyes: micropoems (and Images) by Dale Williams Barrigar

Raw and rumored, ready and real

I saw

a gold feather

in the Grand Canyon

floating down

toward the invisible river

for the last time.

…

And I was

seeing

the gold shadow of your

long eye lashes

hiding your eyes

near the blue-glowing parking lot,

the wolf’s song

as it bounced

back again – I knew

your heart’s fair dream

was not gone

yet…

…

I was born

with this here

very long

and beautiful

heart in hand,

and hair, here,

dear, she said…

…

And so we are on

a magic carpet ride

ever lifting, lifting, and falling,

falling together

on our blanket

by the blues sea

under dark blue trees.

…

That summer, she said,

we lived in a mansion

on top of the green, free

hill;

it was the summer your

hair hid the sides of both of

your eyes that were

staring down so lost and

brokenhearted.

…

Birth is in the hand, she

said.

The castle and cloud moats

are mixed

with the spreading sky

mountains here

in this misty evening

valley land…

…

This fiery little red

dress comes straight

from Caledonia

all the way down, said she, who

was you.

…

Some day, she said,

in the field, so low and lone, but

up, and away over the hill,

over there,

we’ll go roving again.

…

And afterward

you and me we

did lie together then

softly a long time

in rumbling thunder

in the dream.

…

Your hair falls like water

around your blue tears,

Green Eyes.

Your blue tears

are my heartless

torn glacial seashore

weeping.

…

Unheard, still laughing…

unmake my hand

for this

last dance.

…

This is what you get instead.

Poetry and Pictures by Dale William Barrigar (and a shout out for the ever groomed Colonel)

3 thoughts on “Vampire Girl with Green Eyes: micropoems (and Images) by Dale Williams Barrigar”

  1. chrisja70778e85b8abd's avatar chrisja70778e85b8abd says:

    Hi Dale

    Great use of the color blue. You create a stunning unearthly atmosphere.

    The images of the Grand Canyon take me back to the South Rim. It’s so far down that the river does look like it’s disappearing.

    There is a loneliness that you can feel in the poem, and a conflict of unease, and like life itself, things don’t always go our way.

    It’s hard to create something beautiful, and it lasts longer than the awful things people write about. Art is what this is!

    CJA

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  2. chrisja70778e85b8abd's avatar chrisja70778e85b8abd says:

    Wow, that big dude with the cop is unreal! Doggins is looking awfully cute! Almost Gothic: the pic of the apartment building and the blue hue. Great pics!

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  3. Hi Dale
    Just remembered that I read this at three a.m. and meant to comment once coffee maker was done. Well fourteen hours later I suddeny remembered that I only commented at LS!
    Once again these connect similar phrases and produce a poetry narrative of emotion.
    CJA noted blue amd I must agree! Moreover I am surpised neither cop has either a gun or taser drawn. The man looks like old time wrestler Superstar Billy Graham.
    Thank you again for never taking half measures!
    Leila

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