Where I’d Rather Be by Shontay Luna

I already live where I want to. I’m already at

where I want to be in terms to placement and

residing. A ten, fifteen minute walk down the

street I once lived. Several blocks west. A few

blocks feeling like an entire planet away; and

that’s a good thing. I’ve returned; after a twelve

month jaunt in Hyde Park. God returned me to

the neighborhood where I’ve been for the last

thirty years; but on the other side. In a space

nicer than I could ever dream of. After several

nights of opening my eyes in the darkness and

forgetting where I was, a formation of months

tinged in hurt and transformation, I can finally

say I’m at the place I’d most rather be. For that,

I’m both happy and grateful.

Shontay Luna

3 thoughts on “Where I’d Rather Be by Shontay Luna

  1. Shontay

    It was great having your work up the past couple of days.

    And this one shows that it is all about one’s point of view. A person can be greater changed and still live on the same street, more so than someone who moved to Mars.

    We hope to see you again soon,

    Leila

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  2. Bill Tope's avatar Bill Tope says:

    When Leila wrote, “…someone who moved to Mars,” it struck me that that could possibly have been the theme. Until you wrote “30 years,” I thought of a pet–a cat or a dog–who did not roam far, might have been indicated. Intriguing short-short. Thanks for expanding our universe of consciousness, Shantay. I’ve enjoyed your work.

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  3. DWB's avatar DWB says:

    Shontay

    “I already live where I want to” is such a beautiful first line! It speaks of a peace, self-acceptance, and harmony that could transform the world if it became contagious. The writer and person who feels no need to go anywhere is truly at home everywhere. The rest of this piece has an emotional honesty that does justice to that wonderful first line. Thanks for writing!

    Dale

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