don’t you dare say marl
nothing deserves it
likewise heft or skirl
avoid them as you would
verdant
& if it’s evening keep it that way
don’t go with gloam
anymore than you would darkfall
darkfall being
like gloam
down there with
verdant
the sky can never again be azure
anymore than the stars above can twinkle
though sooner by far the stars above twinkle
than a sky ever again be azure
& if deny yourself mulch you must
then do so
mulch having about it the very vetch & sedge
& graunch to convey the earthy
itself a proposition of dubious provenance
wouldn’t you say
mulch?
it’s not down there with verdant
but it’s close
there’s a leatheriness survives i suppose
a compact sogginess
wet as mulch is
generally
Geraint Jonathan
(Wonderful images by CJA)
Geraint
It is a rare poem that is as wise and instructive as this! Azure skies follow Dark and Stormy Nights, and as far as mulch goes, I think it is always too much past a single use. Another entertaing and witty offering by you.
Leila
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I say –
I reserve the right to mulch beneath an azure sky
and deny me darkfall I will cry
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I say –
I reserve the right to mulch beneath an azure sky
and deny me darkfall I will cry
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oops
duplicated and unfinished. I will try again
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Geraint
Samuel Beckett famously said (or didn’t say) “It means what it says.” Saying what one means to say, or worse, not saying what one means to say, or saying what one doesn’t mean (really) to say, are the hardest things in the world. As Wittgenstein said (at the end of the Tractatus) (after saying a whole lot of nothing/s), “Whereof one cannot speak, thereof one must be silent.” If only more of the creatures on this Planet would take his advice, there would be a lot less noise. And maybe then we could get down to business! Thank you for the “word is”…
Dale
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A clever and entertaining catalog of poetic diction pitfalls. Makes me think twice about my own word choices!
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Thanks, all, for the comments – if belatedly!
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