Saragun Verse: The Power of Rabble Part Five

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The wee billigits draw energy from an orgone cube

Housed inside an ancient phone booth

Three made jokes about superman

The fourth wee one didn’t understand

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“clark kent changed to superman in a phone booth

i cannot believe you are so obtuse”

to which the offended billie put up his little fists

and said “watch me change your face to a bruise”

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billigits three and four had seen enough

time is wasted by those who play rough

“have you fellas forgotten we were launched into the sky

by the witch with love in her eye”

iv

The four billigits got on the same page

And decided to find a good guy to sooth Eira’s rage

That’s when they saw hapless Heathcliff strolling across the moor

An idea appealed to the wee four

2 thoughts on “Saragun Verse: The Power of Rabble Part Five

  1. DWB's avatar DWB says:

    Leila

    This section shows how poetry (unlike prose) works through the weight of a single word (and single words), in this case the word (the name) Heathcliff. (Sometimes prose can achieve the same effect, but in that case it’s poetic prose or prose poetry.)

    The sudden (re)appearance of Heathcliff in this section creates cosmic connections!

    Funny, too, how Heathcliff’s name itself very much says what he is, or much of what he is. Another aspect of poetry.

    Along with the weight of single words, poetry works through its rhythm, the lines and stanzas, the phrases and, of course, even syllables.

    “The difference between the almost right word and the right word…is the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.” – Mark Twain

    D

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  2. Dale.

    You are a wonderful reader and thinker and I thank you for all of it. It is fun, for me, to begin with a bizarre premise and then make up what happens as I go like “Keyser Sosa” in The Usual Suspects–simply b.s.-ing a story, using little bits of this and that for the purpose.

    Finale tomorrow. Rest assured that the billigits always find the zaniest way across.

    Leila

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