Saragun Verse: Witch Field

i

There was a lovely field up for sale

Greed over beauty often prevails

Yet came a Witch who cast a spell

And the field vanished behind a veil

ii

It is still where it was of course

But now resides in dimension twenty four

It is now as safe as a field should be

For Pheasants and lives born of green

iii

Money cannot rise above

The standard hubbub of sniff and grub

Tis a wormy, diseased and phallic thing

A reverse parasite to whom the host clings

iv

Therefore the field is no longer for sale

The realtor may as well peddle pain in hell

For the world is never ugly at peace

In silent repose we are free to dream

10 thoughts on “Saragun Verse: Witch Field

  1. Leila

    A BEAUTIFUL poem which conjures up feelings of love in my heart for the poem and for the poet who wrote it because of how much I love beauty, and this is beautiful.

    It has the tragic aura behind it, because we all know what goes on in this world, on this planet, to this earth, IF we are even half awake, and that fact will break your heart, and does break hearts, if you let it.

    And yet, this poem is consoling, because it says it doesn’t NEED to be that way. It also says there is a place where it is NOT that way – in another realm, but somehow here on earth, too. While life continues to live on this planet, there will always be beautiful corners where the Monsters of Greed and Uncaring will not have been able to extend their nasty, self-serving, phallic tentacles (whether woman or man).

    There is NOTHING more timely or important now than the subject of this poem; at the same time: this poem resonates with the history of poetry in English. Chaucer, Tennyson, Robert Frost immediately spring into the mind. Not in the rip-off way, but in the good way of all good poems. Harold Bloom said no good poem is written without the poems that came before it. If you can’t hear those (faintly, and sometimes loudly), you’re not reading good poetry. THIS poem also sounds Shakespearean.

    THANK YOU!

    Dale

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    • Hello Dale
      Thank you! The field in question is in danger of being dug up, paved over and ruined in about fifty ways.
      I hear the old we need housing screed and counter that with why not raze derelict buildings and use those already ruined spaces? We all know the answer, $$$.

      Thanks again!
      Leila

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