During My Semi-Annual Visit by R. Gerry Fabian

with the Romanian gypsy woman

whose waist length black hair

and black lustered eyes

mesmerizes my attention.

I breathe backward.

She, of the white flowing blouse,

which can barely contain

her ample breast girth

and the silk black skirt

all wrinkled and

dirt ridden at the bottom,

directs me to cleanse all

all elements of envy

from my stained spirit.

As she pours the jet black tea,

her emancipated eyes sparkle.

R. Gerry Fabian

(Lovely Bird image provided by Christopher J Ananias)

3 thoughts on “During My Semi-Annual Visit by R. Gerry Fabian

  1. DWB's avatar DWB says:

    R. Gerry

    This is a wonderful character sketch poem and I agree with Leila, “emancipated eyes” is a great turn of phrase. The combination of abstract and concrete here fit each other perfectly. And it says a ton about humanity in general because I believe that some people do indeed have EMANCIPATED EYES, while on the other hand far, far, far, far, FAR too many of us are wearing blindfolds or have blinders on – and without even knowing it.

    This poem also has a wonderful doubling effect, as it says just as much about the speaker of the poem as it does about the fortune teller. I think there are two characters in this poem with emancipated eyes (or an open-hearted spirit). We desperately need such life-affirming work in these desperate times.

    Dale

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