Saragun Verse: On the Plateau of Sphinxes and Finxes

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It was the year of the Octopus bong

Stairway to Heaven was our favorite song

And when the past spoke of tomorrow it said

Never let the promising future go to your head

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We vowed to love till death’s last breath

But we were too young to hedge the bet

When forever came calling in ’93

No one wanted to write a new CD

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Statues of heroes missing their noses

Played out Sphinxes whom the future exposed

As blowhards who ruled for gold and by prick

Even those fey foals named Elizabeth

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It’s always the year of the powerchord

On which generations still light bowls

Forward not straight we go merrily along

Some wondering why Stairway is the greatest song

9 thoughts on “Saragun Verse: On the Plateau of Sphinxes and Finxes

    • I never thought of that! It would be a good name. I recall reading about the one in an Australian aquarium, who, after many hours of observing the staff, learned how to work the manual valves and escaped to the sea by manipulating the controls. They got him tape, reaching out twisting this and that and going from to tank to pipe and eventually opening his way back to the ocean. He was in a “inescapable” holding pen. Someone that smart should not be caged!

      Leila

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  1. chrisja70778e85b8abd's avatar chrisja70778e85b8abd says:

    This has me back in those days at the four way stop, “Forward never straight,” says a pothead sitting beside me pointing like some kind of cheap Rasputin.

    I remember seeing a CD spinning like tin foil in the strange bubble top player. it was another moment in a cold back room.

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  2. LA

    Like all the best poetry, these verses play on the chords of past, present, and future time all at once.

    This feels wistful, wise, and it wins the reader’s heart, at least this reader.

    I can FEEL the truth of this through the screen, and while I don’t know the details, I CAN imagine them, because of this.

    In brief outline, you let the reader in on many secrets that remind them of their own secrets.

    This also has a broken-hearted AND life-affirming tone same time.

    And the music in your lines is multi-leveled, manifold-layered.

    Another song for the ages!

    “The Drifter”

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  3. ROCK ‘n Roll and Trampled Under Foot better than Stairway. Maybe more. Exceeded my wine limit so may be incoherent.

    As the Free Wheelin Bob Dylan said “Keep On Rocking In The Free World”. No that was the not so young Neil. Bob said “I was so much younger then, I’m older than that now”. My back pages.

    Mirthless inmate of sunset city

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    • Hi Doug

      I never understood why “Stairway” was made number one. But when I was a teen, the FM rock stations KISW and KZOK voted it best and left it that way. I recently saw a poll and it was still there (although I’ve been told it finishes number three some years). It is now “greatest” in the “classic rock” category; with age comes specimen jars and categories, each duller than the one before it. Personally I think there cannot be a greatest song, and if there was that would not be it. Just can’t hear it anymore–not since 77 or so.

      Leila

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      • Life In The Fast Lane

        Rocking In The Free World

        A few Elvis, Buddy, Fats, Little Richard, Little River Band, Marvin Gaye, Jerry Lee, Frankie Lane, Perry Como, Rolling Stones, Beatles, Van Morrison, Patti Page.

        I didn’t know that you are just a kid says the guy old enough to grow tentacles.

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